tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post8847154934007170653..comments2008-12-24T05:20:17.588-08:00Comments on Meadows of Heaven: Second Draft: S.E.R.E.N.AUmmi Nisrina Adnihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14263430552131637390noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post-345147176362206092008-12-24T05:20:00.000-08:002008-12-24T05:20:00.000-08:00great job! this time I have clearer understanding ...great job! this time I have clearer understanding of the story.yagamihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14259656937249577778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post-46303844877229637802008-12-22T22:36:00.000-08:002008-12-22T22:36:00.000-08:00respond 2 babysbreath:Well, u can imagine anyone t...respond 2 babysbreath:<BR/><BR/>Well, u can imagine anyone that you like.. just put urself in Serena's shoes.. She is abnormal, i mean mentally ill.. <BR/><BR/>thanx!Ummi Nisrina Adnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14263430552131637390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post-34688946672746699602008-12-22T21:25:00.000-08:002008-12-22T21:25:00.000-08:00Great job, love it!!But now, she hates her.. Darla...Great job, love it!!<BR/><BR/><I>But now, she hates her.. Darla is evil but she will never spill it out. She is ugly after all, they love Darla and the utmost importance no one will believe her. Who will believe her? She nods several times. Then, she heads back to the desk. She starts to scribble on another sheet of paper.</I><BR/><BR/>I just want some clarification. Who is they? If they don't know about Darla why will/how can they love her?<BR/><BR/>Poke me if i'm being to nosy/annoyance/disturbing!! Hihihi!! Gomen!!babysbreathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10269285550020299870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post-49310089759359629632008-12-20T23:30:00.000-08:002008-12-20T23:30:00.000-08:00AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahahaha....love this story...AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<BR/><BR/>hahahaha....love this story so much, This time you improved a lot. Not confusing anymore like before. Very clear and good arrangement of plots. Well, what i guest is right, Split identity. Oh i love the split identity case<BR/>just like Billy Miligan.hahahhaha<BR/><BR/>keep up your good work for your next drafthanmie7227https://www.blogger.com/profile/05806289905364065935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post-80029678439469132752008-12-20T23:27:00.000-08:002008-12-20T23:27:00.000-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.hanmie7227https://www.blogger.com/profile/05806289905364065935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555765272266290921.post-35701932099217420872008-12-20T04:50:00.000-08:002008-12-20T04:50:00.000-08:00Bravo!!ur essay has improved from the previous one...Bravo!!ur essay has improved from the previous one, but the part "utmost importance" i wonder if u can explain to me more abt it.well overall i can understand it better, keep it up!!lupikirlah sendirihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03539416045925582774noreply@blogger.com